Amendments to be made

Upon analysing our rough draft, we have noticed that certain changes need to be made in order to improve the standard of quality of our short film. Below are the reforms that we will hope to make to improve our film.

Cut down some scenes. Some scenes that we have shot are far too long and use too much time of our film. We will need to cut down the excess and make sure that we mainly use shots that are valid.

We need to continue using match-cuts - we have started well with this filming technique and if we continue to use match cuts it will ensure us getting a better grade.

Composition
In the clip to the left, there is a shot that needs improving. The face in the shot shouldn't be in the bottom of the screen, instead we need to align it in the centre of the shot as there is too much space above the subject.

We will also tie in flashbacks with action. 

For example with the shot to the left, we will have a flashback of the missing girl performing the same action in an identical way to show how the main character links with the missing girl.