Feedback from pitch

After the feedback from the pitch, we were given constructive feedback on how to improve our filming techniques and things of that sort.

1) We were told to make a more in depth version of our filming schedule and of course we went on to do that:

Friday 23rd January- Tolu Picks up all equipment take back home to Frampton Estate

Sunday 25th January-
11:00 am meeting at Frampton park estate (Hackney E9)
11:30-14:00 filming in the house of estate and house scenes : including coke, walking,music
Rahim , Nabeelah , Konstancja - behind the camera
Tolu- in front of the camera

Thursday 28th January -
09:00 - pick up equipment again
09:30 - head to the gym (CAI LINKED GYM)
09:45 -film all angles scenes
10:45- filter scenes
11:00- Girl misunderstanding
11:30- Bus scenes
11:45- back to the college
12:00- eqipment given back

Rahim , Tolu , Konstancja - Infront of camera
Rahim , Nabeelah - Behind the camera

This improvement to our schedule meant we were more organised and properly knew the order 

of how we were going to film our different scenes.

2) The other integral bit of feedback we got after the pitch was to make the story line simpler and

not to over complicate things as it was just a title sequence and not a small film.

This meant that we didn't make the film to complicated and it remained simple but effective.