Thursday 5 March 2015

Feedback from rough draft

Things to improve on:

  • Many scenes were still shaky even after stabilisation
  • Bus scene where he mistakes girl wasn't clear
  • Too many walking shots
  • Shots lacked good mise en scene 
  • House scene and walking scenes were too long
  • There were many with a big gap on top of the head 

Strengths:
  • Good storyline - not too complicated 
  • Clear message
  • Good use of props
  • Scenic estate 

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